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The chart Below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast food in Britain.The graphs shows the trends in consumptions of the fast foods. Write a report.

The chart Below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast food in Britain. The graphs shows the trends in consumptions of the fast foods. Write a report. de87

The above bar graph depicts how an individual person according to Income groups had spent pence per week to bought fast food. It can be clearly seen that the Hamburger was widely choice over a period of time by each group of people. To begin with, Fish and Chips were most favorable for low-income groups whereas Pizza was a list choice. The average income group preferred hamburgers first followed by Fish and Chips. In contrast, for high-earning people, Hamburger was the top choice and the second was Pizza. Coming to the line graph, which illustrates overall uses of the fast food in the grams over a period from 1970 to 1990. It's clear that hamburgers and pizza were widely consumed by Britain people. There was a similar positive Trend till 1980 for both but after that hamburger usage was drastically increased and resulted as a first choice. However, there was a negative trend seen for Fish and Chips between 1970 to 1985. By 1990 it was average consumption was around 250 grams. . In conclusion, all the group had spent good pance on hamburger and the pizza and average on fish and chips over 1970 to 1990

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fast
 food.

It can be clearly
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seen
 that the Hamburger was widely
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choice
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people
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begin
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groups
 whereas Pizza was a list You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprimepreferredexcellent
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. The average income You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
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 preferred hamburgers first
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, Hamburger was the top You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprimepreferredexcellent
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 and the second was Pizza.

Coming to the line graph, which illustrates overall
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uses
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fast
 food in the grams over a period from 1970 to 1990. It's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that hamburgers and pizza were widely
 consumed by Britain This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. There was a similar This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 Trend till 1980 for both This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 after that hamburger usage was drastically
 increased and resulted as a first
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choice
. However
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negative
 trend This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 for Fish and Chips Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "between 1970 and 1985".between 1970 and 1985
between 1970 to 1985
. By 1990 it was average consumption was around 250 grams. Don't put a space before the full stop.
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In conclusion
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 on hamburger and the pizza and average on fish and chips over 1970 to 1990