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The chart Below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast food in Britain.The graphs shows the trends in consumptions of the fast foods. Write a report.

The chart Below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast food in Britain. The graphs shows the trends in consumptions of the fast foods. Write a report. de87
The above bar graph depicts how an individual person according to Income groups had spent pence per week to bought fast food. It can be clearly seen that the Hamburger was widely choice over a period of time by each group of people. To begin with, Fish and Chips were most favorable for low-income groups whereas Pizza was a list choice. The average income group preferred hamburgers first followed by Fish and Chips. In contrast, for high-earning people, Hamburger was the top choice and the second was Pizza. Coming to the line graph, which illustrates overall uses of the fast food in the grams over a period from 1970 to 1990. It's clear that hamburgers and pizza were widely consumed by Britain people. There was a similar positive Trend till 1980 for both but after that hamburger usage was drastically increased and resulted as a first choice. However, there was a negative trend seen for Fish and Chips between 1970 to 1985. By 1990 it was average consumption was around 250 grams. . In conclusion, all the group had spent good pance on hamburger and the pizza and average on fish and chips over 1970 to 1990
The above bar graph depicts how an individual person according to Income
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groups
had spent pence per week to
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bought
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fast
food.

It can be
clearly
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seen
that the Hamburger was
widely
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choice
over a period of time by each
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group
of
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people
. To
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begin
with, Fish and Chips were most favorable for low-income
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groups
whereas Pizza was a list
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choice
. The average income
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group
preferred hamburgers
first
followed by Fish and Chips.
In contrast
, for high-earning
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people
, Hamburger was the top
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choice
and the second was Pizza.

Coming to the line graph, which illustrates
overall
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uses
of the
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fast
food in the grams over a period from 1970 to 1990. It's
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clear
that hamburgers and pizza were
widely
consumed by Britain
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people
. There was a similar
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positive
Trend till 1980 for both
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but
after that hamburger usage was
drastically
increased and resulted as a
first
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choice
.
However
, there was a
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negative
trend
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seen
for Fish and Chips
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between 1970 to 1985
. By 1990 it was average consumption was around 250 grams.
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In conclusion
, all the
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group
had spent
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good
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pance
on hamburger and the pizza and average on fish and chips over 1970 to 1990
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IELTS academic The chart Below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast food in Britain. The graphs shows the trends in consumptions of the fast foods. Write a report.

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6.0
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