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The tables shows results of 2 surveys done in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city.Units are measured in percentage.

The tables shows results of 2 surveys done in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city. Units are measured in percentage. JBk0

The two tables provide information of 2 surveys done in the year 1980 and 2010 on several aspects of nation people in a particular city. The data are measured in percentage. Overall, in compare to both year, health care and education was the highest activity, while the bad reason was education in both year. To begin with, in terms of good reasons, a large proportion(72%) of person were interested in education whereas transport was accounted for just above half(52%). Also, shops spent 24% on neither good or bad as opposed to healthcare merely 10% of human. Moreover, education aspects was bad at less than a one in ten. Likewise, transport was worst approximately a third of individuals. Furthermore, at the end of the period, education sites were considerably higher than that of transport for 82% and 39% respectively. Although employment comprised to 5%, it was higher in bad sectors around a quarter(23%).

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