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The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999. 7boy
The pie diagram summarises the most visited tourist attractions in Britain, 1999. The table shows the most visited attractions of the Theme Park. We can see that the pie chart depicts that most of the visitors showing their interest in visiting the Theme Park. In Britain, 38% of tte visitors have visited the Theme Park, this tells the popularity of the Theme Park in the Britian. The Museums & Galleries are the second most visited tourist attractions in Britain with 37% of the visitors visiting them in the year 1999. Seem like visitors are showing their mild interest in visiting the Historic houses and Monuments with 16% of the visitors being visiting them in the year 1999. The Wildlife Parks & Zoos seem to bore as they are the least visited tourist attraction in Britain. We can see that visitors who visit the Theme Parks are showing their interest in visiting the Blackpool Pleasure Beach, which visited by 47% of the visitors who are visiting the Theme Parks. The Alton Towers are the second most visited attraction in the Theme Park category which attracts 17% of the visitors who are visiting the Theme Parks. The Pleasureland, Southport is the third most visited attraction visited by 16% of visitors. Both the Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland, Windsor are the least visited places which are visited by the 20% of the visitors.
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visited
tourist
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attractions
in Britain, 1999. The table
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shows
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visited
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attractions
of the
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Theme
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see
that the pie chart depicts that most of the
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visitors
showing their interest in visiting the
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Theme
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Park
. In Britain, 38% of
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tte
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visitors
have
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visited
the
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Theme
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Park
, this
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tells
the popularity of the
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Theme
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Park
in the
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Britian
. The Museums & Galleries are the second most
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visited
tourist
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attractions
in Britain with 37% of the
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visitors
visiting them in the year 1999. Seem like
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visitors
are showing their mild interest in visiting the Historic
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houses
and Monuments with 16% of the
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visitors
being visiting them in the year 1999. The Wildlife
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Parks
& Zoos seem to bore as they are the least
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visited
tourist
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attraction
in Britain.

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that
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visitors
who visit the
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Theme
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Parks
are showing their interest in visiting the Blackpool Pleasure Beach, which
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visited
by 47% of the
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visitors
who are visiting the
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Theme
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Parks
. The Alton Towers are the second most
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visited
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attraction
in the
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Theme
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Park
category which attracts 17% of the
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visitors
who are visiting the
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Theme
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Parks
. The
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Pleasureland
,
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Southport
is the third most
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visited
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attraction
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visited
by 16% of
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visitors
. Both the
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Chessington
World of Adventures and
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Legoland
, Windsor
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are
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places which are
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999.

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6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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