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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. moQ8

The following two charts demonstrate the variation during a ten-year enlistment of foreign and local students to Australian universities from the years 2001 to 2010. The first diagram illustrates the entrance of overseas students accepted in Australia, which showed that the tendency quadrupled over ten years for the total alumni. Moreover, the number of new students also increased twice the number of 20 000 they had at the beginning of 2001. In regard to the second graph for local students, the acceptance ratio showed little variation and no noticeable increase at the end of the decade. Similarly, the total number of students demonstrated a sudden peak for the first seven years until reaching a flat line for the last three years. In general, the amount of enrolled local students dominated and had a one-third increase from the initial number of 40 000. Overall, it can be observed that overseas students increased their enrollment rate during a gap of ten years in comparison to local students whose admission tended to decrease.

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students
 to Australian universities from the years 2001 to 2010.

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 that the tendency quadrupled over ten years for the total alumni. Moreover
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number
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 of 20 000 they had at the beginning of 2001.

In regard to the second graph for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincialregional
local
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students
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little
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end
 of the decade. Similarly
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number
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students
 demonstrated a sudden peak for the first
 seven years until reaching a flat line for the last three years. In general
, the amount of enrolled You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincialregional
local
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students
 dominated and had a one-third increase from the initial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of 40 000.

Overall
, it can be observed
 that overseas You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 increased their enrollment rate during a gap of ten years in comparison
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincialregional
local
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students
 whose admission tended to decrease. 