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The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category or exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category or exports in 2016 compared with 2015. 23Mb

The bar graph shows the average prices the European Union (EU) spent per kilometre clothing import from six different years in 1993 and 2003. It is obvious that the EU paid the highest amount for each kilometre to Argentina. According to the illustration, the EU spent the highest amount for clothing import from Argentina which was approximately 28 pounds per kilometre in 1993. This rate was significantly higher; almost 9 times higher than the rate it gave to Bangladesh. The second and third highest rates were given to Brazil and Japan, roughly 23 and 15 pounds respectively. China and India got less than that, but still, their rates were higher than the import rate from Bangladesh. The latter received only around 3 pound per kilometre which was almost three times less than the rate paid to Japan. The rate went higher in 2003 for China, India and Bangladesh which were the least paid countries in a decade earlier. The price for costume imported from Brazil remained unchanged while it slightly declined for Argentina and Japan. Despite the price changes, Argentina and Brazil were still paid higher than that of India and Bangladesh while China’s price went as high as 17 pounds, almost double than that of 1993’s rate.

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 to Brazil and Japan, roughly 23 and Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.15 pounds (ca. 7 kg)15 pounds (6.8 kg)15 pounds (ca. 7 kilogram)15 pounds (6.8 kilogram)15 pounds (0.01 t)15 pounds (0.01 ton)
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 around Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.3 pound (1.36 kg)3 pound (1.36 kilogram)3 pound (ca. 1,361 g)3 pound (1,360.78 g)3 pound (ca. 1,361 gram)3 pound (1,360.78 gram)
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