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The tables show results of surveys done in in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city. Units are measured in percentage

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Rate of two surveys outcome on six characteristics of urban life in a particular city in the years 1980 and 2010 is illustrated
 by the two tables.

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 from the tables, education, medicine and the environment led the way with a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
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 score compared to other side transport especially
 during the specified period

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IELTS academic The tables show results of surveys done in in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city. Units are measured in percentage

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

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Lexical Resource: 6.5

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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