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Part 2 (Cue Card) Describe someone who travels a lot by plane. Please say – How do you know him/her? – Why does he/she travel a lot? – Where does he/she travel to?

The given table depicts the presence of women in senior management level of three companies ( Eidan Ltd, Bamfort Ltd and FInsbury Ltd) by percentage over a period of 40 years. Overall, women's participation at top most level has increased significantly in all the three companies with maximum part shown at Eidan Ltd with striking 85% rise from 1975 to 2015. Firstly, Eidan Ltd have started with only 3% women at hierarchy. However, right after 1980 the number starts rising with a jump of 11%. This rapid growth ends up at 4% mark and tops the list of all three. Also, the numbers grow in Bamforth Ltd by 2% each year till 2000 and shows sudden climb in 2015 by 29% surge. On the other hand, Finsbury Ltd which initiates at high mark in starting, remains low by the time 2015 arrives. In fact, in between 1975 to 1980 and 1990 to 2000, it falls by 2%, but a good jump of 6% during 2000 to 2015 period.
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table depicts the presence of women in senior management level of three
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companies
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Eidan
Ltd,
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Bamfort
Ltd and
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FInsbury
Ltd) by percentage over a period of 40 years.

Overall
, women's participation at top most level has increased
significantly
in all the three
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companies
with maximum part shown at
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Eidan
Ltd with striking 85% rise from 1975 to 2015.

Firstly
,
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Eidan
Ltd have
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started
with
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only
3% women at hierarchy.
However
, right after 1980 the number
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starts
rising with a jump of 11%. This rapid growth ends up at 4% mark and tops the list of all three.
Also
, the numbers grow in
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Bamforth
Ltd by 2% each year till 2000 and
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shows
sudden climb in 2015 by 29% surge.

On the other hand
,
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Finsbury
Ltd which initiates at high mark in starting, remains low by the time 2015 arrives. In fact, in
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between 1975 to 1980
and 1990 to 2000, it falls by 2%,
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but
a
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good
jump of 6% during 2000 to 2015 period.
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IELTS academic Part 2 (Cue Card) Describe someone who travels a lot by plane. Please say – How do you know him/her? – Why does he/she travel a lot? – Where does he/she travel to?

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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