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The following chart illustrates the results of a British survey taken in 2005 related to Housing preferences of UK people.

The bar graph divulge how many uk citizens (in percentage) preferred to four type of houses; flats, terraced house, detached house and semi detached house in three different cities London, Oxford and Cambridge in 2015 As an overall trend, London dwellers more preferred to flats as compare to detched houses. While in Cambridge most of people lived in detched houses. In London people more preferred to flats 58%. While less than 30% dwellers of Oxford and Cambridge of thier flats. Terraced houses were liked by people in similar percentage in three cities. London, Oxford and Cambridge ( 15- 18%). On the other hand, least people preffered to detched houses less than (10%). While 10% more Oxford's people lived in detched housing preferred by people of London 18% and in similar percentage about 28% Oxford and Cambridge in sort of housing
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, terraced
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, detached
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semi detached
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in three
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Oxford
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detched
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IELTS academic The following chart illustrates the results of a British survey taken in 2005 related to Housing preferences of UK people.

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