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The tables show response to a questionnaire given by two groups of people abot a new theatre

The tables show response to a questionnaire given by two groups of people abot a new theatre LBkjR
The given table charts illustrate the feedback to a questionnaire given by a couple of group of people such as club members and the general public regarding new theatre. To commence with, when enquired about the production quality of the theatre, both club members and the general public shared similar to number 70% and 67% and gave the rating as excellent also 17%-18% of both groups felt it satisfactory. Moreover, almost equal number 13% and 15% opined it as poor. In addition to this, information about the performance to the public, 72% of club members and 88% of the general public ranked it excellent; 23% and 10% each rated it satisfactory, whereas only a small amount felt it to be poor. Lastly, when questioned about the facilities of the theatre, two groups had a different opinion 75% of club members and 55% of the general audience evaluated it to be excellent, 2% of the club members and found it to be poor whereas, 26% of the general people rated it poorly. Overall, it is vivid that the proportion of people giving excellent and satisfactory grade in each criteria was higher than those who gave a poor rating.
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table charts illustrate the feedback to a questionnaire
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given
by a couple of group of
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such as
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club
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members
and the general
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public
regarding new
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theatre
.

To commence with, when
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enquired
about the production quality of the
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theatre
, both
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club
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members
and the general
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public
shared similar to number 70% and 67% and gave the rating as
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excellent
also
17%-18% of both groups felt it satisfactory.
Moreover
, almost equal number 13% and 15% opined it as poor.

In addition
to this, information about the performance to the
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public
, 72% of
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club
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members
and 88% of the general
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public
ranked it
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excellent
; 23% and 10% each rated it satisfactory, whereas
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only
a
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small
amount felt it to be poor.

Lastly
, when questioned about the facilities of the
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theatre
, two groups had a
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different
opinion 75% of
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club
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members
and 55% of the general audience evaluated it to be
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excellent
, 2% of the
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club
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members
and found it to be poor whereas, 26% of the general
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people
rated it
poorly
.

Overall
, it is vivid that the proportion of
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people
giving
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excellent
and satisfactory grade in each
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criteria
was higher than those who gave a poor rating.
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IELTS academic The tables show response to a questionnaire given by two groups of people abot a new theatre

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197 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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