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I hardly believe that you have done this illegal work

I hardly believe that you have done this illegal work 3AEkb
1. We should not take too much for inaccurate information. 2. I have time but not for very unimportant work. 3. Riding a bike without a helmet is not only unsafe but also dangerous. 4. I will never shy away from seeing the impossible. 5. TV serials are neither an uninteresting nor enjoyment. 7. I can't completely disagree with this idea. . 8. seldom do I do bad things The diagrams delineate the information about the current design of a university sports center and after reconstruction How would it be. Overall, currently, two outdoor courts stand on the either side of the complex but in the future both outdoor courts will be replaced by the sports hall and the leisure pool as well as adding two dance studious, 2 extra changing room, cafe and sports shop. Turning to the diagrams, there are two massive outdoor Courts on the eastern and western sides, however, in the future the eastern outdoor courts will be replaced by the sports hall and the western courts altered by the leisure pool. Moreover, there will not be any changes in the current changing room, seating and reception but the gym will be enhanced on the northern side of the future complex. In addition, in the corner of the east part will be constructed two dance studios as well as additional changing room and cafe will be built on the southeast side of the future center. Furthermore, sports shop will be opened to the adjoining of the reception and another changing room also be made up of the southeast side.
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unsafe
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design of a university
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sports
center and after reconstruction How would it be.

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currently
, two
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outdoor
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courts
stand on the either side of the complex
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in the
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future
both
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outdoor
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courts
will
be replaced
by the
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sports
hall and the leisure pool
as well
as adding two dance studious, 2 extra
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changing
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room
,
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cafe
and
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sports
shop.

Turning to the diagrams, there are two massive
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Courts
on the eastern and western
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,
however
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future
the eastern
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outdoor
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courts
will
be replaced
by the
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sports
hall and the western
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altered by the leisure pool.
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in the
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room
, seating and reception
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but
the gym will
be enhanced
on the northern side of the
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future
complex.

In addition
, in the corner of the east part will
be constructed
two dance studios
as well
as additional
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changing
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room
and
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cafe
will
be built
on the southeast side of the
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center.
Furthermore
,
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sports
shop will
be opened
to the adjoining of the reception and another
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changing
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room
also
be made
up of the southeast side.
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IELTS academic I hardly believe that you have done this illegal work

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4 paragraphs
263 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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