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The tables depict information about the consumption of beer and fruit juice in virous nations.

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The tables depict information about the consumption of beer and fruit juice in virous nations. It is clear from the tables that Ireland has the highest ratio of beer consumption at 155 litres while Canada has the highest proportion of fruit juice consumption. According to what it is shown Ireland has the highest ratio with 155 litres per person, Germany is the second in the order with an avrage of 119 litres for each person while Austria ranked in the third at 106 litres per person and Finland has the lowest proportion of the beer consuming with only 79 litres. On the other hand, fruit juice, Canada has the most significant ratio at 52. 6 Litres, United States ranked in the second with consuming of 42. 8 litres per person whil New Zeeland has the lowest number at 24. 8 litres per person. To sum up, we can say that Ireland has the highest ratio of beer consuming whil Canada has the highest number in fruit juice.
The tables depict information about the consumption of beer and
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virous
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from the tables that Ireland has the highest
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ratio
of beer consumption at 155
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litres
while Canada has the highest proportion of
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fruit
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juice
consumption.

According to what it
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Ireland has the highest
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ratio
with 155
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litres
per
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person
, Germany is the second in the order with an
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avrage
of 119
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litres
for each
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person
while Austria ranked in the third at 106
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litres
per
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person
and Finland has the lowest proportion of the beer consuming with
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only
79
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litres
.

On the other hand
,
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fruit
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juice
, Canada has the most significant
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ratio
at 52. 6
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Litres
, United States ranked in the second with consuming of 42. 8
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litres
per
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person
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whil
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New Zeeland
has the lowest number at 24. 8
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litres
per person.

To sum up, we can say that Ireland has the highest
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ratio
of beer consuming
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whil
Canada has the highest number in
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fruit
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juice
.
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