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The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. W230
A 2008 report on the energy consumption in the USA by fuel from 1980 till now, and its projection till 2030 is picturised in the given line graph. Overall, it is clear that the fuel consumption from fossil fuels such as petrol and coal had an upper-hand over the others’ and is expected to be the same in future. As per the chart, in 1980, Americans depended heavily on petrol and oil, and this was approximately 35 quadrillion units. Their next choice was natural gas(20 q units), followed by coal (16 q units). It is also noted that the fuel consumption from other sources (nuclear, solar and hydro-power) was comparatively less, which stood at 4 q units. The trend is seen almost the same at present, when the petrol consumption hits over 40 q units, while coal and natural gas is seen used moderately at around 25 q units. Compared to the consumption pattern in 1980, the dependence on other sources varies slightly, with nuclear power the most favorite (6 q units) and hydro-power the least (3 q units). By 2030, energy consumption from fossil fuels that is from petrol and coal is expected to rise further. The use of petrol is anticipated to hit nearly 50 q units, which would be almost 20 q units more than that of coal. While the natural gas consumption would remain at an average level, no change is expected in case of other sources.
A 2008 report on the energy
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consumption
in the USA by
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fuel
from 1980 till
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now
, and its projection till 2030 is
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picturised
in the
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given
line graph.

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, it is
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clear
that the
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fuel
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consumption
from fossil
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fuels
such as
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petrol
and coal had an upper-hand over the others’ and is
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expected
to be the same
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in future
.

As per the chart, in 1980, Americans depended
heavily
on
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petrol
and oil, and this was approximately 35 quadrillion
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units
. Their
next
choice was natural gas(20 q
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units)
, followed by coal (16 q
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units)
. It is
also
noted that the
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fuel
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consumption
from
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other
sources (nuclear, solar and hydro-power) was
comparatively
less, which stood at 4 q units.

The trend is
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seen
almost the same at present, when the
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petrol
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consumption
hits over 40 q
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units
, while coal and natural gas is
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seen
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used
moderately
at around 25 q
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units
. Compared to the
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consumption
pattern in 1980, the dependence on
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other
sources varies
slightly
, with nuclear power the most favorite (6 q
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units)
and hydro-power the least (3 q units).

By 2030, energy
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consumption
from fossil
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fuels
that is
from
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petrol
and coal is
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expected
to rise
further
. The
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use
of
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petrol
is anticipated
to hit
nearly
50 q
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units
, which would be almost 20 q
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units
more than that of coal. While the natural gas
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consumption
would remain at an average level, no
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change
is
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expected
in case of
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other
sources.
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IELTS academic The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
241 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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