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Task 1 the given line graph show the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car,bus and train between 1970 and 2030.

Task 1 the given line graph show the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus and train between 1970 and 2030. JeGe

The rendered line graph displays the count of UK people who travel by three transports each day during 1970 to 2030. In detailed view, about 4 million commuters did commute by car in 1970 and this figure remain steady till 1980. After 4 decades, the number of people who did travel by car increased slightly to about 7 million. In 2030, it is predicted that, it will be rose gradually by 2 million. Moreover, the number of UK people in 1970, travelling each day by train was 2 million and this figure followed upward trend to 3 million in 2000. In next 20 years the count of people remain constant. However, it is estimated that, the amount of humans will grow to about 5 million in 2030. Probing further, in 1970, the number of commuters who travelling each day by bus was 4 million and there was a plummet to approximately 3. 1 million in 2020. In the end of the given period, the number of people will reach to less than 3 million. Overall, the highest people prefer to car and least commuters like travelling by bus.

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this figure remain
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number
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people
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million
. In 2030, it is predicted
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million
. Moreover
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of UK You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 in 1970, travelling each day by train was 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 and this figure followed upward trend to 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 in 2000. In next
 20 years the count of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 remain constant. However
, it is estimated
 that, the amount of humans will grow to about 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 in 2030. Probing further
, in 1970, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of commuters who travelling each day by bus was 4 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 and there was a plummet to approximately 3. 1 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 in 2020. In the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
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given
 period, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 will reach to less than 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
. Overall
, the highest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 prefer to car and least commuters like travelling by bus. 