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The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006.

The tables depict the data about the consumption (kg per person) and production (in million tonnes) of potatoes in five different areas of the world in 2006. Overall, according to the table, the indicator of consumption of the potatoes in Europe was the highest among other countries and lowest consumtion was in Africa. Also, the production of potato was high in both Asia and Europe, but was the least produced product in the South and Central America. Firstly, the consumption of potato recorded 96. 1 kg per person in Europe and this proportion was followed by 57. 9 kg per person in the North America. Moreover, while the production of potatoes comprised about 60 kg per person in the North America, it constituted less than 26 kg per person in other mentioned areas. As for production of potatoes, the Asia was in the first place by 131. 2 million tonnes of production, and in contrast with the indicator of consumption of potatoes, the Europe hold second place with 126. 3 million tonnes production of potatoes. However, the production of potatoes accounted for below 25 million tonnes in other remaining areas.
The tables depict the data about the
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in Europe was the highest among other countries and lowest consumtion was in Africa.
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was high in both Asia and Europe,
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was the least produced product in the South and Central America.

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recorded 96. 1 kg per
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in Europe and this proportion
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in the North America.
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comprised about 60 kg per
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in the North America, it constituted less than 26 kg per
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in other mentioned areas.

As for
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, the Asia was in the
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, the Europe hold second place with 126. 3
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accounted for below 25
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IELTS academic The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006.

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