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The maps given below the conference hall in 1981 and planned in 2025.

The maps illustrate the information of conference hall which was built in 1981 and proposed layout for 2025. In 1981, the room, a car park and reception was located on the northern wall as well as one another room along to South corner. Furthermore, the garden was situated on the whole eastern and southern side. In 2025, location of rooms, hall and reception will remain untouched. Moving further, In north and east side the car park area will be replaced for 20 rooms; however, whole garden on eastern side would be chopped and area will reduced which would be utilized for car parking. After that in the southern side garden area will be reduced and 6 rooms would be constructed which will include
The maps illustrate the information of conference hall which
was built
in 1981 and proposed layout for 2025.

In 1981, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
, a car park and reception
was located
on the northern wall
as well
as one another
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
along to South corner.
Furthermore
, the garden
was situated
on the whole
eastern and southern side. In 2025, location of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rooms
, hall and reception will remain untouched.

Moving
further
, In north and east side the car park area will
be replaced
for 20
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rooms
;
however
, whole garden on eastern side would
be chopped
and area will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
which would
be utilized
for car parking. After that in the southern side garden area will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
and 6
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rooms
would
be constructed
which will include

IELTS academic The maps given below the conference hall in 1981 and planned in 2025.

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