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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labeled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labeled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. lpN9

The bar charts illustrate the number of bananas and coffee sale trade in UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden in the year 1999 and 2004. Units are measured in millions of euros. Overall, it is noticeable that Great Britain and Switzerland has a highest fair-trade sale for both of the products. Furthermore, Switzerland has a dramatically increase for bananas from 1999 to 2004. However, Sweden has a lowest sales on coffee for both years. Focusing on coffee, the data show that UK and Switzerland have high number of sales with 20 millions of euros and 6 millions of euros respectively in 2004. In addition, Switzerland has doubled the sales over 5 year period from 3 millions of euros in 1999 to 6 millions of euro in 2004. On the contrary, Sweden has only 0. 8 millions of euros in 1999, which it is the least sales for both year. Turning to bananas, Switzerland has the most number of sales in 2004, which is 47 millions of euros. Moreover, United Kingdom sale is about 5 times than the last 5 years. However, Belgium, Sweden, and Denmark has a little interested.

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