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The graph below illustrates the calculated percentage of people consuming 5 units of fruits and vegetables every day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

The graph below illustrates the calculated percentage of people consuming 5 units of fruits and vegetables every day in the UK from 2001 to 2008. 0MOG9
The graph below illustrates the calculated percentage of people consuming 5 units of fruits and vegetables every day in the UK from 2001 to 2008. Based on the data it is observed that the maximum amount of healthy food is consumed by women then followed by men and children. It is apparent that the intake of healthy food among women, men and children has increased from 2001 to 2007 but it decreased slightly in 2008. As per the graph, the children and the men had the constant percentage from 2001 to 2003 while the women's intake has increased from 20 to 25. But, in 2004 the percentage of all the consumption among the people has marginally increased from 10 to 15 in children 15 to 20 for men and 25 to 30 for women. It can be seen that the overall graph kept increasing from 2004 to 2006. Although in 2007 the percentage of women consumption has decreased by 5 units while the children's healthy intake increased by 5 units and men's intake remained the same. In 2008 the intake for all the people has decreased. The men's healthy consumption was high in 2006 and 2007 while the women's ate maximum healthy food in 2006 and the children had it in 2007.
The graph below illustrates the calculated
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percentage
of
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people
consuming 5 units of fruits and vegetables every day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

Based on the data it
is observed
that the maximum amount of
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healthy
food
is consumed
by women then followed by
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men
and
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children
. It is apparent that the
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intake
of
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healthy
food among women,
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men
and
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children
has
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increased
from 2001 to 2007
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but
it decreased
slightly
in 2008.

As per the graph, the
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children
and the
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men
had the constant
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percentage
from 2001 to 2003 while the women's
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intake
has
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increased
from 20 to 25.
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But
, in 2004 the
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percentage
of all the consumption among the
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people
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has
marginally
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increased
from 10 to 15 in
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children
15 to 20 for
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men
and 25 to 30 for women.

It can be
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seen
that the
overall
graph
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kept
increasing from 2004 to 2006. Although in 2007 the
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percentage
of women consumption has decreased by 5 units while the children's
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healthy
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intake
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increased
by 5 units and
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men
's
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intake
remained the same. In 2008 the
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intake
for all the
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people
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has
decreased. The
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men
's
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healthy
consumption was high in 2006 and 2007 while the women's ate maximum
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healthy
food in 2006 and the
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children
had it in 2007.
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IELTS academic The graph below illustrates the calculated percentage of people consuming 5 units of fruits and vegetables every day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

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