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The table uses four particular years of newborns ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia since 1981.

The table uses four particular years of newborns ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia since 1981. 2KBEA
The table uses four particular years of newborns ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia since 1981. Overall, the average rate of the children born in 2006 was slightly higher than the other three years. To begin, in 2006, the women who have the one child, had the highest rate, at 13. 2%, and also two children twa had sad slight increase compared to the other three years. However three children and four or more juveniles had the lowest rate compared to the other three years. Respectively, it has 21. 5% anf 11. 0%. Eventually, in 2006 year was a most number of no child birth year and the percentage was far higher than other years. Furthermore, in 1986 and 1981 had a similar number of child births and it was the lowest rate of birth year. However, in 1986 had the highest value of two children born 1981. As well as four or more children born in 1986 was less than in 1981. Specially, in 1981 four or more children birth rate was the highest than the other years. Although, in 1996 was the average babies birth year compared to the other three years.
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four particular years of newborns ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia since 1981.
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and four or more juveniles had the lowest
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three years.
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11. 0%.

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was a most number of no child
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and the percentage was far higher than
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years.

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born 1981.
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born in 1986 was less than in 1981.
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IELTS academic The table uses four particular years of newborns ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia since 1981.

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