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The table shows the results of a survey of people's perception of celebrity news coverage. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the results of a survey of people's perception of celebrity news coverage. NmPw2
Given is a table comparing the findings of people's perception of celebrity news coverage. Overall, the results suggest that most people are in favour of the idea that too much news coverage is received by celebrities and TVs provide more latest information. It is obvious that a vast majority of people think celebrities receive too much news coverage while a small proportion believe there is too little coverage on news and seven interest said there was right amount. In accordance of who is responsible for the amount, more than half voted for news organisations and 34% for the public. Both of them were felt responsible by roughly one in ten respondents. When asked to identify who is in charge of providing most of the coverage, exactly 60 % choose Tv news. The percentage of 15 % are of the view of online news while this percent is triple for other factors
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Given
is a table comparing the findings of
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people
's perception of celebrity
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news
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coverage
.
Overall
, the results suggest that most
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people
are in
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favour
of the
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idea
that too much
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news
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coverage
is received
by celebrities and TVs provide
Use only "latest" (without 'more') when you use the superlative.
more latest
information. It is obvious that a vast majority of
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people
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think
celebrities receive too much
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news
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coverage
while a
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small
proportion believe there is too
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little
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coverage
on
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news
and seven interest said there was right amount. In accordance of who is responsible for the amount, more than half voted for
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news
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organisations
and 34% for the public. Both of them
were felt
responsible by roughly one in ten respondents. When asked to identify who is in charge of providing most of the
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coverage
, exactly 60 % choose
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Tv
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news
. The percentage of 15 % are of the view of online
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news
while this percent is triple for other
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factors
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IELTS academic The table shows the results of a survey of people's perception of celebrity news coverage.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
150 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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