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comparison the average and rainfall in the two cities Beijing and Hongkong through each month

comparison the average and rainfall in the two cities Beijing and Hongkong through each month LBobR

While the first chart illustrates the medium highest temperature from January to December, the second one describes the average amount of rainfall in the same period of time. Overall, it is noticeable that the temperature and rainfall vary significantly in both Beijing and Hong Kong, with high figures in the summer and the fall and low in other seasons. With reference to the line graph, average temperatures monthly in Hong Kong are higher than in Beijing, in particular, despite slightly fluctuate just from 17*C to 29*C, its average temperature is almost higher than 20*C. In comparison with the temperature in the latter city which rise sharply from the lowest point to the top by around 28*C and reach a peak of 30*C in July, then go down strikingly to the point of 3*C in December. Turning to the bar chart, it is clear to see that the amount of rainfall in Beijing is much lower than the rest, nine out of twelve months in this city the precipitation does not exceed 50 mm, interestingly rainfall rises dramatically in the middle of the year and reaches a peak of approximately 200mm in July. By contrast, Hong Kong has high average precipitation, mainly between May and September, ranging from around 170mm to nearly 380mm; meanwhile, months of winter and spring are the opposite, the rainfall in these months is quite low.

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