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The table shows the recommended daily value of Potassium, Vitamin B, Magnesium, Vitamin C, and Calcium four juices.

The table shows the recommended daily value of Potassium, Vitamin B, Magnesium, Vitamin C, and Calcium four juices. OwEgj
This table gives information about the required value of five different nutrients is Potassium, Vitamin B, Magnesium, Vitamin C, and Calcium in four juices. It is seen that most of the daily value of percentage in juices is seen in Vitamin C and the least is seen in Calcium. To start with potassium, Juice C contains the highest value of Potassium among the four juices which is 26% and Juice D contains the lowest amount of Potassium (21%). Talking about the highest containing nutrient among the four juices (Vitamin C), the maximum amount of Vitamin C is in Juice B at 120% while Juice C contains the lowest amount of Vitamin C which is 100%. The most amount of Vitamin B is seen in Juice C at 10% and least in Juice D at 7%. It is observable that, all the four juices contain an equal amount of Magnesium which is 2% except Juice B it contains 6%. The amount of Calcium in juices is the lowest among the nutrients with only 1% in Juice B and 2% in Juice A and Juice B each while Juice C contains 5% Calcium.
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