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The table shows the proportion of people in England who agreed with same-sex marriage from 1989 to 2013.

The table shows the proportion of people in England who agreed with same-sex marriage from 1989 to 2013. N3Vqq
The data illustrates the ratio of acceptance of homosexual merriages by England's people from 1989 to 2013. Units are given in pecentages. Overall, it is possible to form two major groups. The first group consist of chistian and non-religious people due to the rougly same trend and the results in 2013. On the contrary, non-christian people fall into the second group, because it shows the slowest growth and the worst result in the end. With regards to the first group, non-religious people had the largest percentage of acceptance in 1989 equals 20% and the fasterst increase of this parameter over the years with 77% in 2013. Then follow all christians, all of them started with 9% in 1989 and had rougly the similar trend, which resulted in 55%, 61%, and 53% for Church of England, Roman Catholic, and other christian confetions followers, respectively. On the other hand, the second group depicts the slowest rate of acceptance evolution, with 5% in 1985 and only 30% in 2013.
The data illustrates the ratio of acceptance of homosexual
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merriages
by England's
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people
from 1989 to 2013. Units are
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pecentages
.

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groups
. The
first
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group
consist of
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chistian
and non-religious
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people
due to the
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rougly
same trend and the results in 2013.
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, non-christian
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people
fall into the second
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group
,
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shows
the slowest growth and the worst result in the
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first
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group
, non-religious
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people
had the largest percentage of acceptance in 1989 equals 20% and the
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fasterst
increase of this parameter over the years with 77% in 2013. Then follow all
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christians
, all of them
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started
with 9% in 1989 and had
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the similar trend, which resulted in 55%, 61%, and 53% for Church of England, Roman Catholic, and other christian
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confetions
followers,
respectively
.

On the other hand
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depicts the slowest rate of acceptance evolution, with 5% in 1985 and
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30% in 2013.
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IELTS academic The table shows the proportion of people in England who agreed with same-sex marriage from 1989 to 2013.

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