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The provided the table illustrates the IELTS’s average band score of Germany, French, Indonesian and Malay in 2010.

The provided the table illustrates the IELTS’s average band score of Germany, French, Indonesian and Malay in 2010. Dq2lj
The provided the table illustrates the IELTS’s average band score of Germany, French, Indonesian and Malay in 2010. As a general trend, the German students got the highest score; nevertheless, the lowest band was taken by Indonesian’s students in 2010. As far as German students with the highest score are concerned, they had 6. 9 score at speaking test; however, they got 6. 3 point at reading skill, which was the lowest. Moreover, German speakers achieved 6. 8 in listening, and 6. 6 band was taken in writing. Furthermore, the student’s band scores are fluctuating within 6. 1 to 6. 9 band. It has been observed that it is not the same at skills. As regards with the Indonesian students taken the lowest score, they got 6. 1 band at reading, while they 6. 7 band at speaking. Besides, 6. 3 band was gotten at listening stage, it is asserted that they are most good at reading. Additionally, they are lower by 0. 5 band than German students.
The provided the table illustrates the IELTS’s average
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of Germany, French, Indonesian and Malay in 2010.

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students
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the highest
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, the lowest
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was taken
by Indonesian’s
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students
in 2010.

As far as German
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students
with the highest
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are concerned
, they had 6. 9
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score
at speaking
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test
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6. 3 point at reading
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skill
, which was the lowest.
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, German speakers achieved 6. 8 in listening, and 6. 6
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was taken
in writing.
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, the
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are fluctuating within 6. 1 to 6. 9
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. It has
been observed
that it is not the same at
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skills
.

As regards with the Indonesian
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taken the lowest
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, they
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6. 1
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at reading, while they 6. 7
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at speaking.
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, 6. 3
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was gotten
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at reading.
Additionally
, they are lower by 0. 5
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than German
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IELTS academic The provided the table illustrates the IELTS’s average band score of Germany, French, Indonesian and Malay in 2010.

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