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The pictures below show the comparison between two methods of cultivating crops by swing basket with rope and bucket technique.

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The pictures below show the comparison between two methods of cultivating crops by swing basket with rope and bucket technique. To begin with, both processes used specific techniques to irrigate the field. In the swing basket process, two farmers would bring a basket made of bamboo or leather which is water-resistant on every side. Next, both farmers hold the ropes which are connected to the basket. Moreover, when they start to dig water under one to two meters, they will through the basket put the water. After, they push the water up and move it into the irrigation channel. The crops are ready to be cultivated. Differently, the next method is to use animal energy such as buffalo or cow. This energy is transported by placing a metal round in the cow’s body which is tightened by rope to the next pump. To start with, this method is used to dig water in a deep wall under fifty meters. Further, new equipment is built in the tap of the wall and consists of rollers and pulleys from metal. All of the rollers, pulley, bucket, and cow are connected by tight ropes. It is started when the bucket through to the deep wall, the water comes inside. Then, the cow will draw the rollers and pulley to put up the bucket-filled water. Next, in the tap wall, the bucket will pour the water immediately through the irrigation channel. To sum up, both of the pictures show the natural water irrigation process by using human and animal energy. After all, these methods are used in different places of water.
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of cultivating crops by swing
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basket
with
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and
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bucket
technique.

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begin
with, both processes
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used
specific techniques to irrigate the field. In the swing
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basket
process, two farmers would bring a
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basket
made of bamboo or leather which is water-resistant on every side.
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Next
, both farmers hold the
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ropes
which
are connected
to the
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basket
.
Moreover
, when they
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start
to dig
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water
under one to two meters, they will through the
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basket
put the
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water
. After, they push the
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water
up and
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it into the irrigation channel. The crops are ready to
be cultivated
.

Differently
, the
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method
is to
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animal energy such as buffalo or
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cow
. This energy
is transported
by placing a metal round in the
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cow’s
body which
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by
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to the
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pump. To
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with, this
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in a deep
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under fifty meters.
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in the tap of the
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and consists of rollers and pulleys from metal.
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rollers, pulley,
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, and
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are connected
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through to the deep
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comes
inside. Then, the
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cow
will draw the rollers and pulley to put up the bucket-filled
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water
.
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, in the tap
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, the
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bucket
will pour the
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immediately through the irrigation channel.

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the natural
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irrigation process by using human and animal energy.
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