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The table shows the number of sales of 4 types of drinks in the months of January, February, March and April in a small cafe.

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The table shows the number of sales of 4 types of drinks in the months of January, February, March and April in a small cafe. prepositions It is clear that the greatest marketability of the drink in three months, there was tea and coffee. On the other hand, cocktails were sold the least in each month. Of the four drinks, tea and coffee sold the most, at the beginning of the month 250 and in March 220. And in April, the sale of ice drinks increased from 150 to 230. It can be seen that in all months the sales of cocktails were the lowest, 90 and 110. And juices sold much more (200, 190 and 210) than cocktails and ice drinks. Sales of the most popular tea and coffee fell sharply in April to 180 and were in third place after ice drinks 230 and juices 200.
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of 4 types of
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drinks
in the
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months
of January, February, March and April in a
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clear
that the greatest marketability of the
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drink
in three
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, there was tea and coffee.
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, cocktails
were sold
the least in each month.

Of the four
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drinks
, tea and coffee sold the most, at the beginning of the
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month
250 and in March 220. And in April, the
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sale
of ice
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drinks
increased from 150 to 230.

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seen
that in all
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months
the
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sales
of cocktails were the lowest, 90 and 110. And juices sold much more (200, 190 and 210) than cocktails and ice
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drinks
.
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Sales
of the most popular tea and coffee fell
sharply
in April to 180 and were in third place after ice
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drinks
230 and juices 200.
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IELTS academic The table shows the number of sales of 4 types of drinks in the months of January, February, March and April in a small cafe.

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4 paragraphs
148 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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