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The graph below represents the total expert of clothing from 3 different countries over a time period. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant

The graph below represents the total expert of clothing from 3 different countries over a time period. OVwn3
Both maps present how an island was developed for tourism over time. The island is around 250 meters long and is surrounded entirely by the ocean. The development of the island was huge with many facilities added over time. Many facilities were constructed on the island. Accommodation is now numerous, with 6 buildings erected to the west of the island, and a further 9 rooms added to the east. In the middles of the lodgings a restaurant and reception area were also built, with footpaths and vehicle tracks added to connect the buildings. A pier was built to the south of the island, where boats can arrive. The trees remained unchanged on the island, with facilities erected around them. The only development to the beach on the west is a swimming area which was added.
Both maps present how an
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island
was developed
for tourism over time.

The
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island
is around 250 meters long and
is surrounded
entirely
by the ocean. The development of the
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island
was huge with
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many
facilities
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added
over time.

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Many
facilities
were constructed
on the
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island
. Accommodation is
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now
numerous, with 6 buildings erected to the west of the
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island
, and a
further
9 rooms
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added
to the east. In the middles of the lodgings a restaurant and reception area were
also
built, with footpaths and vehicle
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tracks
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added
to connect the buildings.

A pier
was built
to the south of the
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island
, where boats can arrive. The trees remained unchanged on the
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island
, with facilities erected around them. The
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only
development to the beach on the west is a swimming area which was
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added
.

IELTS academic The graph below represents the total expert of clothing from 3 different countries over a time period.

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