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The table shows the number of people (millions) that remain undernourished around the world from 2000 to 2009. The chart displays the global price of two food grains over the same period. Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The table shows the number of people (millions) that remain undernourished around the world from 2000 to 2009. The chart displays the global price of two food grains over the same period. VPQ0J
Here, the tabular data depicts that millions of people remain undernourished around the globe while, the line graph illutrate grains price suc as (Rice an Wheat) between 2000 and 2009. overall, it is noticable that the number of unernourished people are the highest in te year 2009 whereas, both 2002 and 2002 million of people are the least. The chart represents that the price of wheat is higher than rice trougout the same period. A glance at the table reflects that in the year 2009, majority of people undernourished which is 1024 million. In contrast, it was decreased by 100 in 2008. Furthermore, from 2004 to 2006 it was almost same figure. In 2002, number of undernourished people was 857 and it was slightly increased for the year 2002. Analysis of chart reveals that in 20th century price of rice and wheat was same doller per ton. The amount of rice unchanged for next 4 years then significant rose and which is $300. In addiution, again it was went up in the year 2008 and stable at aroun $900 perton in the year 2009. on the other hand, for 2002, price of wheat increased ten slightly dipped till 2006 around $300 ten after it was ramatically surged and reache at $1100 in the year 2009.
Here, the tabular data depicts that millions of
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remain undernourished around the globe while, the line graph
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illutrate
grains
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price
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suc
as
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(Rice
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an
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Wheat)
between 2000 and 2009.

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overall
, it is
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noticable
that the number of
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unernourished
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people
are the highest in
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te
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year
2009 whereas, both 2002 and 2002 million of
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people
are the least. The chart represents that the
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price
of
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wheat
is higher than
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rice
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trougout
the same period.

A glance at the table reflects that in the
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year
2009,
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majority of
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people
undernourished which is 1024 million.
In contrast
, it
was decreased
by 100 in 2008.
Furthermore
, from 2004 to 2006 it was almost same figure. In 2002, number of undernourished
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people
was 857 and it was
slightly
increased for the
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year
2002.

Analysis of chart reveals that in 20th century
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price
of
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rice
and
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wheat
was same
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doller
per ton. The amount of
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rice
unchanged for
next
4 years then significant rose and which is $300. In
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addiution
, again it was
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went
up in the
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year
2008 and stable at
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aroun
$900
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perton
in the
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year
2009.
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on
the other hand, for 2002,
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price
of
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wheat
increased ten
slightly
dipped till 2006 around $300 ten after it was
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ramatically
surged and
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reache at
$1100 in the
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year
2009.
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IELTS academic The table shows the number of people (millions) that remain undernourished around the world from 2000 to 2009. The chart displays the global price of two food grains over the same period.

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