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The presented diagram elucidates an illustration of how carbon moves through various stage to the from a complete cycle.

The presented diagram elucidates an illustration of how carbon moves through various stage to the from a complete cycle. m8bVN
The presented diagram elucidates an illustration of how carbon moves through various stage to the from a complete cycle. Overall, it is a natural and cyclical process with eight stages, commencing with transforming the energy from the sun into organic carbon and culminating with evaporating into the atmosphere as CO2. At the initial stage, sunlight go down on the earth, and a plants will grow up in the sunlight; then, an animals eat it; also, dead organism soak into the ground; as a result, it become fossil fuels. Subsequently, Carbon oxygen comes from animal and plants respiration; moreover, factories and automate produce Carbon oxygen; afterward
The presented diagram elucidates an illustration of how
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carbon
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moves
through various stage to the
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a complete cycle.

Overall
, it is a natural and cyclical process with eight stages, commencing with transforming the energy from the sun into organic
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carbon
and culminating with evaporating into the atmosphere as CO2.

At the initial stage, sunlight go down on the earth, and
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a plants
will grow up in the sunlight; then,
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an animals
eat it;
also
, dead organism soak into the ground;
as a result
, it
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become
fossil fuels.

Subsequently
,
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Carbon
oxygen
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comes
from animal and plants respiration;
moreover
, factories and automate produce
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Carbon
oxygen; afterward
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IELTS academic The presented diagram elucidates an illustration of how carbon moves through various stage to the from a complete cycle.

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