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The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. 7Vm6
The bar graph illustrates percentage covered by components of GDP from IT and Service Industry of UK from 1992 till 2000. In general, IT industry's contribution in GDP can be seen to have soared exponentially from its initial percentage. Similarly, Service Industry also experienced noticeable growth in percentage by the end of timeline. To begin with, IT industry had 6 percentages in GDP which was 2 more percentages than Service Industry but after 4 years it fell slightly from its rising streak followed by a sharp increase in 1996 and achieving the peak 15 percentages 2 years later. As for Service Industry, after a drastic rise between 1992 and 1994, the percentages grew steadily gradually advancing by 2 times its initial start point by year 2000.
The bar graph illustrates
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covered by components of GDP from IT and
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Industry
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from 1992 till 2000
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In general
, IT industry's contribution in GDP can be
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seen
to have soared
exponentially
from its initial
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percentage
.
Similarly
,
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Service
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Industry
also
experienced noticeable growth in
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percentage
by the
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end
of timeline.

To
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begin
with, IT
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industry
had 6
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percentages
in GDP which was 2 more
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percentages
than
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Service
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Industry
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but
after 4 years it fell
slightly
from its rising streak followed by a sharp increase in 1996 and achieving the peak 15
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percentages
2 years later. As for
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Service
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Industry
, after a drastic rise between 1992 and 1994, the
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percentages
grew
steadily
gradually
advancing by 2 times its initial
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start
point by year 2000.
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IELTS academic The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.

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126 words
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