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The table illustrated about different options of trip in United Kingdom from 1985 to 2000. Overall, we can see that travel increased most of in modes overtimes. The most popular prefer is car. The graph shown us that walking and bicycle are slighlty dropped 255 to 237 and 51 to 41 respectively between 1985 and 2000. Moreover, we can see that local bus is sharply decreased 429 to 274. On the other hand, car and other choice are climbed to 2000. The results shows that car is 3, 199 to 4, 806 and other is 450 to 585. Long distance bus, train and taxi are also steadily rose. For example in 1985 train is 289 and in 2000 it is 366. Taxi is 13 in 1985 and in 2000 it's average is 42.
The table illustrated about
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different
options of trip
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in United Kingdom
from 1985 to 2000.
Overall
, we can
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see
that travel increased
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most of in
modes overtimes. The most popular prefer is car. The graph shown us that walking and bicycle are
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slighlty
dropped 255 to 237 and 51 to 41
respectively
between 1985 and 2000.
Moreover
, we can
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see
that local bus is
sharply
decreased 429 to 274.
On the other hand
, car and other choice
are climbed
to 2000. The results
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shows
that car is 3, 199 to 4, 806 and other is 450 to 585. Long distance bus, train and taxi are
also
steadily
rose.
For example
in 1985 train is 289 and in 2000 it is 366. Taxi is 13 in 1985 and in 2000 it's average is 42.
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