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The diagram below shows the hydroelectric power station

The diagram below shows the hydroelectric power station m83rn
The following figure illustrates how a hydroelectric power station produces a power using a fallen water under the high pressure. Hydroelectric power stations ought to be constructed downstream revies, especially in areas with wide cross-sections like lakes. To contain the water in that reservoir dam must be built. This massive concrete structure uses as a barrier to save the water with high level behind it. During the day, intakes in the lower part of dam open to allow the water to fall by the gravity, that makes fan connected to generator flip to generate the power which it accessed to the national network. On the other hand, during evening, water flows in the opposite direction (upstream). Pumps are used to push the water from the low-level reservoir to the high-level reservoir through the intake. In conclusion, water moves in two different directions everyday. During day, water flows downstream to generate the energy, while it moves upstream using pump along the night to keep the water in high level.
The following figure illustrates how a hydroelectric
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station produces a
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using a fallen
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water
under the high pressure.

Hydroelectric
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power
stations ought to
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downstream
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revies
,
especially
in areas with wide cross-sections like lakes. To contain the
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water
in that reservoir dam
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must
be built
. This massive concrete structure
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uses
as a barrier to save the
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water
with high level behind it. During the day, intakes in the lower part of dam open to
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allow
the
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water
to fall by the gravity, that
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makes
fan connected to generator flip to generate the
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power
which it accessed to the national network.

On the other hand
, during evening,
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water
flows in the opposite direction (upstream). Pumps are
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used
to push the
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water
from the low-level reservoir to the high-level reservoir through the intake.

In conclusion
,
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water
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moves
in two
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different
directions
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everyday
. During day,
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water
flows downstream to generate the energy, while it
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moves
upstream using pump along the night to
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keep
the
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water
in high level.
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