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The table shows Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2015 and future projection of 2025.

The table shows Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2015 and future projection of 2025. NM0Kb
The vertical bar chart compares the information about major exports of southland in 2000 and 2015. Also it has predicated the future export for the year 2015. The data is evaluated in billion. Overall, it is evident that international tourism has increased over the time. However, an opposite trend can been seen in meat product. Lowest meat export will be recorded in 2025. Turning to the details, in 2000, tourism export accounted nearly 8 billion dollar. In next 25 years the tourism of export will experienced a sustainable gain and reached to 10 billion dollar in 2025. Before increasing in 2015, export of dairy product accounted to 7 billion dollar in 2000 and it will be fall to 9. 5 billion dollar in 2025. Analyzing further, export of meat product was 6 billion dollar in 2000, being higher than that of in 2015 by approximately 5. 5 billion dollar. After the ten year it will be drop to 5 million dollar.
The vertical bar chart compares the information about major
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exports
of
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southland
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Also
it has predicated the future
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export
for the year 2015. The data
is evaluated
in
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billion
.

Overall
, it is evident that international tourism has increased over the time.
However
, an opposite trend
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can been
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seen
in meat product.
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Lowest
meat
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export
will
be recorded
in 2025.

Turning to the
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details
, in 2000, tourism
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export
accounted
nearly
8
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billion
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dollar
. In
next
25 years the tourism of
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export
will
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experienced
a sustainable gain and reached to 10
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billion
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dollar
in 2025.
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Before
increasing in 2015,
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export
of dairy product accounted to 7
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billion
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dollar
in 2000 and it will be fall to 9. 5
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billion
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dollar
in 2025.

Analyzing
further
,
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export
of meat product was 6
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billion
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dollar
in 2000, being higher than that of in 2015 by approximately 5. 5
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billion
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dollar
.
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After
the ten year it will be
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drop
to 5 million
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.

IELTS academic The table shows Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2015 and future projection of 2025.

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