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The chart below shows the rate of Covid 19 which was spread among different parts of Uzbekistan

The chart below shows the rate of Covid 19 which was spread among different parts of Uzbekistan KGEDM
The bar chart displays the incidence of covid disease that was spread among seven regions of Uzbekistan in the year 2020. Overall, people who lived in three regions ( Tashkent, Samarkand and Namangan) suffered more from the covid 19 than lived that of four regions. On the other hand, the only place which saw less detriment from that infection was Bukhara region. The rate of infected people was higher in Tashkent at 2500 and in Samarkand at 2000. This trend was also followed by Namagan, where nearly 2300 people got the coronavirus disease in that year. The figure for Navoi was as high as for Khorezm, at 1800 and 1700 respectively. However, the population of  Andijan region did not experience much that deadly disease. In fact, 600 of people got the¹¹ infection there. Bukhra was only place in the country where less patients underwent the covid 19, at appròximately 200 people.
The bar chart displays the incidence of
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covid
disease that
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among seven
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regions
of Uzbekistan in the year 2020.

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,
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people
who
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lived
in three
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regions
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(
Tashkent, Samarkand and
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Namangan
) suffered more from the
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covid 19
than
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lived
that of four
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regions
.
On the other hand
, the
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only
place which
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less detriment from that infection was Bukhara region.

The rate of infected
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people
was higher in Tashkent at 2500 and in Samarkand at 2000. This trend was
also
followed by
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Namagan
, where
nearly
2300
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people
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got
the coronavirus disease in that year. The figure for
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Navoi
was as high as for
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Khorezm
, at 1800 and 1700
respectively
.

However
, the population of
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Andijan
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did not experience much that deadly disease. In fact, 600 of
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people
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got
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the¹¹
infection there.
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Bukhra
was
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only
place in the country where
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less
patients underwent the
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covid 19
, at apprò
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200
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people
.
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