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The table shows sources of students income over a ten year period in the United Kingdom

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The table shows sources of students income over a ten year period in the United Kingdom During the period from 1988/89 to 1998/99, students income from students loan increased from 8% in 1988/89 to 24% in 1998/99 of total income. There was a 50% decrease in parental contribution which fell down from 32% in 1988/89 to 16% in 1998/99. Student income from grant was constant between 1988/89 to 1992/93 at 38%. After that there was a decrease in grant which fell down to 23% in 1995/96 and went down again to 14% in 1998/99. During this period there was a growth in student earnings which went up from 6% 1988/89 and reached to a peak of 12% in 1998/99. Student income from other sources had some fluctuations. There was a 3% decrease from 1988/89 to 1992/93. Then it increased gradually from 27% in 1995/1996 to 34% in 1998/99. Overall, with the exception of 1992/93, total student income per year increased from 4395 pounds in 1988/89 to 5575 pounds in 1998/99.

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ten year
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income
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some
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from 1988/89
 to 1992/93. Then it increased gradually
 from 27% in 1995/1996 to 34% in 1998/99.

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 per year increased from Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.4395 pounds (ca. 2 t)4395 pounds (1.99 t)4395 pounds (ca. 2 ton)4395 pounds (1.99 ton)4395 pounds (ca. 1,994 kg)4395 pounds (1,993.54 kg)
4395 pounds
 in 1988/89 to Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.5575 pounds (2.53 t)5575 pounds (2.53 ton)5575 pounds (ca. 2,529 kg)5575 pounds (2,528.78 kg)5575 pounds (ca. 2,529 kilogram)5575 pounds (2,528.78 kilogram)
5575 pounds
 in 1998/99. 