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The bar charts illustrate the average house expenses in England and its capital city – London, and to present the comparison regarding the average house prices between distinct areas of England within the year 2013

The bar charts illustrate the average house expenses in England and its capital city – London, and to present the comparison regarding the average house prices between distinct areas of England within the year 2013 QLA7K
The bar chart provided imformation upon the change of the residents pay house rent in England and capital in two different years such as 1995 and 2013. Meanwhile, second picture compared the house price in other areas of England like as London, Midland, NorthEast, SouthEast, SouthWest and North West in 2013. Overall, it is clear evident that the highest cost house of two charts was London, addition in the second picture the NorthEast was shortest in the spent money for house price in 2013. Turn on the detail, in 1995, the citizent spent money for house price of london was shorter than London, accodring to there was a gradually increase from 130000 to 200000 erou. After 19 years, the London lie on 1st place where the highest cost house of England these number of experece of house price in the capital of England reached a peak over 400000 erou. The following to second chart, London and SouthEast where lie on 1st and 2nd place in others areas of England. there were to the close up 400000 and 320000 erou Repseitively. Next, the figure of SouthWest and NorthWest stood up 200000and 260000 erou. Finally, under 100000 erou that the people living North West must paid house price
The bar chart provided
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imformation
upon the
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change
of the residents pay
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house
rent in England and capital in two
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different
years such as 1995 and 2013. Meanwhile, second picture compared the
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house
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price
in other areas of England like as London, Midland,
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NorthEast
,
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SouthEast
,
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SouthWest
and North West in 2013.
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, it is
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clear
evident that the highest cost
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house
of two charts was London, addition in the second picture the
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NorthEast
was shortest in the spent money for
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house
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price
in 2013.

Turn on the detail, in 1995, the
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citizent
spent money for
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house
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price
of
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london
was shorter than London,
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accodring
to there was a
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gradually increase
from 130000 to 200000
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erou
. After 19 years, the London lie on 1st place where the highest cost
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house
of England these number of
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experece
of
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house
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price
in the capital of England reached a peak over 400000
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erou
.

The following to second chart, London and
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SouthEast
where lie on 1st and 2nd place in others areas of England.
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there
were to the close up 400000 and 320000
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erou
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Repseitively
.
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, the figure of
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SouthWest
and
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NorthWest
stood up 200000and 260000
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erou
.
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, under 100000
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erou
that the
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people
living North West
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must
paid
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IELTS academic The bar charts illustrate the average house expenses in England and its capital city – London, and to present the comparison regarding the average house prices between distinct areas of England within the year 2013

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