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THE TABLE SHOWS ON CONSUMER SPENDING MONEY FOR THREE CATEGORIES OF PRODUCTS IN FIVE COUNTRIES IN 2002.

THE TABLE SHOWS ON CONSUMER SPENDING MONEY FOR THREE CATEGORIES OF PRODUCTS IN FIVE COUNTRIES IN 2002. 1kP3y
THE TABLE ILLUSTRATES THE INFORMATION ABOUT HOW MUCH PERCENTAGE OF CONSUMER SPENDING MONEY FOR 3 CATEGORIES OF PRODUCTS IN 5 DIFFERENT COUNTRIES OVER A PERIOD OF 2002. OVERALL, IT IS MANIFEST FROM THE TABLE THAT THE RATIO OF FOOD/DRINK WAS THE HIGHEST, WHEREAS THE RATIO OF LEISURE EDUCATION WAS THE LOWEST THROUGHOUT THE GIVEN PERIOD. INITIATING AT 28. 91% FOOD, TOBACCO, DRINK CONSUMER SPENDING IN IRELAND AND DECREASE TO 16. 36% FOOD, DRINK, TOBACCO MONEY SPENDING IN ITALY. SIMILARLY 18. 80% IN SPAIN, 15. 77% IN SWEDEN AND 32. 14% CONSUMER SPENDING MONEY IN TURKEY. 2ND CATEGORY IS CLOTHING, FOOTWEAR. IN IRELAND 6. 43% CONSUMER SPENDING AND HIGH THAN TO 9% IN ITALY AND IN SPAIN 6. 5% CONSUMER SPENDING ON CLOTHING, FOOTWEAR WHILE THE LOWEST AVERAGE OF CONSUMER SPENDING ON CLOTHING, FOOTWEAR PRODUCTS IS 5. 40% IN SWEDEN AND 6. 63% IN TURKEY. HOWEVER, THE NUMERAL OF CONSUMER SPENDING ON LEISURE EDUCATION PRODUCTS AND SERVICES IS 2. 21% AND GROW AT 3. 20% IN ITALY LIKEWISE, THE QUANTITY OF CONSUMER SPENDING ON LEISURE AND EDUCATION IMMENSELY LOWERING IN SPAIN. MOREOVER, 3. 22% IN SWEDEN ALTHOUGH, THE DIGIT OF CONSUMER SPENDING ON LEISURE AND EDUCATION IN TURKEY THAT'S WHY THE 4. 35% CONSUMER SPENDING MONEY ON LEISURE AND EDUCATION.
THE TABLE ILLUSTRATES THE INFORMATION ABOUT HOW MUCH PERCENTAGE OF
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