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The making procces of avocado oil

The making procces of avocado oil MqLpN

The extraction of the avocado product is shown in the diagram below. There is shown the process of doing oil from avocado. Generally, there are 8 stations for the making the process. The product is processed very clearly. In the beginning, avocado is got to rotten fruit. After then goods are sent to the washer to remove different viruses. After cleaning products go to the blender to crush. Before doing oil, the matter had better go separation of solids and liquids. In the end, this has been separated matter is sent to bake to boil at 45 degrees to remove bacteria.

The extraction of the avocado product is shown
 in the diagram below. There is shown
 the process of doing oil from avocado.

Generally
, there are 8 stations for the making the process. The product is processed
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very
clearly
.

In the beginning, avocado is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 to rotten fruit. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to the washer to remove This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 viruses. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 cleaning products go to the blender to crush. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
 doing oil, the matter had better go separation of solids and liquids. In the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, this has been separated
 matter is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to bake to boil at 45 degrees to remove bacteria. 