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The table shows how patients evaluated five services at three health clinic

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The table compares how patients evaluated five different services at three health clinic. It is clear that the patients in Peveril centre and Marchbank centre make up the major choice while Longston centre is lowly evaluated in overall average. Looking at the details, how patient appreciated health clinic centers in Peveril centre consist of the highest level 8, 3 and 7, 3 respectively whereas the Longston centre is insignificant choice at 5, 8 among others in overall average. Moreover, Doctors service account for highly appreciate from 8 to 8, 7 in all clinic centers. Care of children make up almost the Sam level at 6, 3, 7, 5 and 7, 3. The evaluated centers in booking appointments make up at 22, 1 in all three clinic centers.
The table compares how patients evaluated five
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consist of the highest level 8, 3 and 7, 3
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is insignificant choice at 5, 8 among others in
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. Care of children
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up almost the Sam level at 6, 3, 7, 5 and 7, 3. The evaluated
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in booking appointments
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IELTS academic The table shows how patients evaluated five services at three health clinic

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  American English
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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