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The table shows data about the average length of time ( in minutes) that people of different ages spend in a consultation with family doctors in a number of Countries. Write a report summarising the information. Select and describe the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The table shows data about the average length of time ( in minutes) that people of different ages spend in a consultation with family doctors in a number of Countries. Write a report summarising the information. Select and describe the main features and make comparison where relevant. XRwq

The charts gives information about typical time patients spend with physicians in various countries. This study used age 10 - 70 years. Overall, nine countries was chosen for the study. According to the data, generally, more than half the given countries, the minutes spent increases with age. To begin, France, Brazil, USA, Uk and Italy has dramatically increased minutes with the doctor as age increases. For example, France 16 -38, Brazil 12-20, USA 13-31, Uk 9- 21, then, Italy 17- 29. India has a more mark of rise and fall, peaking at 21 minutes for oldest people aged 40-60, declines steadily as age increases from 15 for the youngest to 10 minutes in the oldest people. It is only Chile, that had high minutes stay 32 from youngest age with slight rise 38 minutes for the oldest people

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