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The table shows data about railway networks in 6 different cities around the world.

The table shows data about railway networks in 6 different cities around the world. b3ael

The table shows data about railway networks in 6 different cities around the world. The table compares 6 networks in terms of date opened, kilometers of route, passengers every year. Overall, it is clear that the 3 older railway systems serve significantly more passengers each year than the elder. Looking at the table more clearly, one can see that London is the oldest railway system which is opened in 1863. It is also the longest network with about 394 kilometers of route. The second-longest is in Paris, it is just half of London, about 1999 kilometers, however, it serves more passengers each year. Despite only being the third-largest scale, the Tokyo system is used the most, with 1927 million passengers each year. In the 3 newer networks, Washington DC is the biggest with total of 126 kilometers of route compares with only 11 kilometers and 28 kilometers of Kyoto and Los Angeles respectively. Los Angeles is the newest railway network which is opened in 2001, while Kyoto is the smallest, about 28 kilometers and serve only 45 millions passengers each year

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