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The table below gives information about how many staff worked in university by subject area in 2005 and 2013. Overall, the number of university staff marginally decreased by 7 subjects, while the number of teachers of other 2 subjects increased slightly during the period, though the number of medical teacher rised in a faster rate. The overall rise in number of mental subject teacher was significant. In subject as business it started from 23128 teachers to 28769 teachers between 2005 and 2013. The similar inverse could be observed in number of education teachers. The figures for teachers of education slowly went down by almost 3 percent during whole period.
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worked in university by
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area in 2005 and 2013.
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of university staff
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, while the
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of
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of other 2
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increased
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of medical
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of mental
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was significant. In
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as business it
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from 23128
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to 28769
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between 2005 and 2013. The similar inverse could
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in
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of education
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. The figures for
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of education
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went down by almost 3 percent during whole period.

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