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In many countries, families are not eating meals together in a daily basic. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

In many countries, families are not eating meals together in a daily basic. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development? 0a751
Nowadays, the problem that families are not having meals together in a daily day in many countries has gained a great deal of public attention. Although this trend appears useless, the downside will be more significant. There are a lot of reasons why people decide not having meals with each other. First, since each member has a different job, they can not control the specific time to each together, so they must have meal whenever they have free time. For example, parents have to go to work at 8 am, but children must be at school at 6. 30 am, so they can not have breakfast at the same time. Second, people in modern life focus on their work more than eating. They usually eat fast food which can be bought around easily, they think it saves time and they can turn back to work or study as soon as possible. Although this problem can help people save time, the negative side will be more significant. In traditionally, all members of the family were used to eating together, they thought this is time for parents and children to share stories, talk about what was happened all day, which lead to enhance the relationship of each other. But now, by not having meals together, people will lack of understanding and connection between members, which may cause conflictions in family. In conclusion, there are a lot of reasons why people tend not to eat meals together, which lead to various disadvantages for members of family. By giving some reason and example about this problem, people will have a right decision for themself.
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IELTS academic In many countries, families are not eating meals together in a daily basic. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

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