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The table shows and predicts Change in percentage of people above the age 65 in 3 countries

The table shows and predicts Change in percentage of people above the age 65 in 3 countries 1A5Q7
The given data indicates and predicts the average change in number of people over the age of 65 in three various countries, Canada, Germany and UK. The overall trend is increase in the percentage in the span of 45 years from 1988 to 2030. The table gives the information from the past 12 years from 1988 to 2000 and predicts the coming years till 2030. During the last 11 years of 20th century along with year 2000, all three countries experienced atleast 0. 66 % increase in percentage of seniors in the country. In Germany the growth is highest, increasing significantly from 20. 46% to 25. 32%. However, UK sees a minimum growth during these years, increasing from 14. 23% to 14. 89%. Moreover, Canada's population for people over 65 years, increases from 16. 32% to 20. 67%. However, In all three countries during the first 30 years of 21st century, there is a prediction of atleast 5% Increase in the life expectancy of the people over the age of 65. This time UK is predicted to experienc the highest growth, from 14. 89% to 20. 35%. In contrast, Germany might experience the least growth, ranging from 25. 32% to 30. 42%. In Addition, Canada is expected to experience 5. 68% increase which is atleast 1% more than what was experienced before.
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data indicates and predicts the average
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change
in number of
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people
over the age of 65 in three various
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, Canada, Germany and UK.

The
overall
trend is
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increase
in the percentage in the span of 45 years from 1988 to 2030.
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table gives the information from the past 12 years from 1988 to 2000 and predicts the coming years till 2030.

During the last 11 years of 20th century along with
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2000, all three
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experienced
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0. 66 %
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in percentage of seniors in the
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country
. In Germany the
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is highest, increasing
significantly
from 20. 46% to 25. 32%.
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, UK
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a minimum
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during these years, increasing from 14. 23% to 14. 89%.
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, Canada's population for
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people
over 65 years,
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from 16. 32% to 20. 67%.

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, In all three
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during the
first
30 years of 21st century, there is a prediction of
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5%
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in the life expectancy of the
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over the age of 65. This time UK
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the highest
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, from 14. 89% to 20. 35%.
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, Germany might experience the least
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growth
, ranging from 25. 32% to 30. 42%.
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, Canada is
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