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The table show the result of a survey to find out what members of a city sportsclub think about club activities facilities and opening hours

The table show the result of a survey to find out what members of a city sportsclub think about club activities facilities and opening hours 3EpN
The given table compares the views of male and female members about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours. Overall, the majority of both genders rated all three kinds of activities very satisfied as opposed to remaining two ratings in the table. Looking at the range of activities, over half (55%) of males were very satisfied, compared to around a third (35%) of females. 35% of females gave the rating satisfied, slightly lower than the counterparts at exactly two-fifths (40%). Not satisfied responses were given by 5% (males) which was nowhere near as close to females at 30%. Turning to the club facilities, very satisfied grading was nearly similar at 64% (females) and 63% (males) respectively. 27% of males marked the activities satisfied vs females with 22%, a bit difference. In contrast, 14% of females ranked not satisfied and only one tenth of males thought so. When it comes to opening hours, nearly three-fourths (72%) of females were very happy, whereas only 3% were not contended. Precisely, a quarter of females (25%) were happy for opening hours. 44% of males were very satisfied, much more than females at 37%. Very happy evaluation was given by Just under one-fifth (19%) of males.
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table compares the views of male and
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members about the club’s
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activities
, facilities and opening hours.

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activities
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as opposed to remaining two ratings in the table.

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activities
, over half (55%) of
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males
were
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very
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, compared to around a third (35%) of
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females
. 35% of
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females
gave the rating
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satisfied
,
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responses were
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by 5%
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(males)
which was nowhere near as close to
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females
at 30%. Turning to the club facilities,
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grading was
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(females)
and 63%
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(males)
respectively
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marked the
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activities
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with 22%, a
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ranked not
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(25%) were happy for opening hours. 44% of
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were
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, much more than
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at 37%.
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happy evaluation was
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IELTS academic The table show the result of a survey to find out what members of a city sportsclub think about club activities facilities and opening hours

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