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The table represents datas about the annual money spending by students of universityin five categories among three countries in 2007.

The table represents datas about the annual money spending by students of universityin five categories among three countries in 2007. K13L
The table represents datas about the annual money spending by students of universityin five categories among three countries in 2007. Overall, in country A and B students spend much money on all things rather than country C. Clearly, in country A an B they use their money the most on accomadation over all categories at 45% and 35% but the percentage of C country students is only 30%. However, on food the number of C country is the highest in three countries at 36% and others are lower than it. In addition, the students of A country are the lowest result spending money on books in comparison with B and C countries, which is lower three-times than B and seven-time than C. On leisure category, country A students are equal with B country numbers, whreas C country students are lower one tenth compare with A and B countries. Furthemore, the number of A country students is the most spending money on books in three countries, meanwhile, C country is the lowest degree, which is lower five -times than B country.
The table represents
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datas
about the annual
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money
spending by
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students
of
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universityin
five categories among three
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countries
in 2007.
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, in
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country
A and B
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students
spend much
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money
on all things
rather
than
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country
C.

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, in
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country
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A an
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use
their
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money
the most on
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accomadation
over all categories at 45% and 35%
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but
the percentage of C
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country
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students
is
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only
30%.
However
, on food the number of C
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country
is the highest in three
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countries
at 36%
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and others
are lower than it.
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, the
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students
of A
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country
are the lowest result spending
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money
on books
in comparison
with B and C
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countries
, which is lower three-times than B and seven-time than C. On leisure category,
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country
A
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students
are equal with B
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country
numbers,
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whreas
C
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country
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students
are lower one tenth compare with A and B
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countries
.
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Furthemore
, the number of A
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country
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students
is the most spending
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money
on books in three
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countries
, meanwhile, C
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country
is the lowest degree, which is lower five -times than B
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country
.

IELTS academic The table represents datas about the annual money spending by students of universityin five categories among three countries in 2007.

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