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the two pie charts highlight the devices people in the 18 to 25 group use to watch television in Canada over a ten-year period between 2009 and 2019

the two pie charts highlight the devices people in the 18 to 25 group use to watch television in Canada over a ten-year period between 2009 and 2019 YDkn

the two charts illustrate the data about devices people in the group of 18 to 25 age use to watch television in Canada over a decade between 2009 and 2019. In general, the Conventional Tv saw a notable decrease from 34% to 4% of use in 2019 because of replacement to Flat-screen TV with rising from 8% to 27%. The lion's share of the laptop with 20% is changed now more comfortable and smaller devices for watching and it decreased to 12% of using. In particular, the use of mobile phones increased almost four times in 2019 rather than 2009. Tablet is rather negligible got much more common and also reveals going up four times from 5% to 19% in ten years. Finally, Descop computers had a slight majority in 2009 but time by time it lost its common role marginally in watching from 18% to 12% of use. Overall, all this time the old devices have been replacing their position with modern and smarter devices by losing their own commons.

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