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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. JWYE
The supplied blueprints illustrate the information about roads which helped to get the way of city hospital during 2007 and 2010. Examining the chat carefully, it can be seen in the first diagram that in initial year, in the southeast corner, there was built a city road which run east to west and in the centre of this road, a hospital road was constructed which aided to go toward city hospital. Moreover, at the both sides of hospital road, some bus stops were built. later on, city hospital is surrounded by ring road which linked to parking space in the east direction where staff and public parked their cars. Moving ahead, after three years, city hospital and ring road remainef same but a public car was made separately in the east side of hospital. Staff car park had taken place of some bus stops after that a roundabout was constructed in front of city road which gave way to a big bus stop that was made in the West direction of hospital road. overall, it can be observed that some changes were occurred in the road accessing to a city hospital over the given time period but a major alter was the establishment of roundabout.
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during 2007 and 2010. Examining the chat
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diagram that in initial year, in the southeast corner, there
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road
which run east to west and in the
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hospital
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was constructed
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bus
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later
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is surrounded
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which linked to parking space in the east direction where staff and public parked their cars. Moving ahead, after three years, city
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and ring
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a major alter was the establishment of roundabout.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

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