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The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India’s gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India’s gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000. JW3E
The bar chart indicates the results of India's total local product between 1960 and 2000. Overall, when we take a look at the bar chart, it shows us, there are a number of fluctuations over the years. The product's amount has changed by years. The Agriculture products have decreased over the years. On the other hand, both Industry and Services products have increased. Agriculture products were approximately 63 in 1960 whereas Industry products were almost 16 and Services products were about 18. After that Agriculture products was getting diminished surprisingly. First almost tp 53, 44 and 32, 12 from 1970 to 2000. Industry products, however, was raising. First of all up to 21, 25 and then 26, 27 over the years respectively. Services products have made significant variations. Although the amount of Services harvests were around 23 in 1970, it has increased almost to 27, 42 in 1980, whereas it was already up to approximately 62 by 2000.
The bar chart indicates the results of India's total local
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product
between 1960 and 2000.

Overall
, when we take a look at the bar chart, it
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shows
us, there are a number of fluctuations over the years. The product's amount has
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changed
by years.

The Agriculture
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products
have decreased over the years.
On the other hand
, both Industry and
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Services
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products
have increased. Agriculture
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products
were approximately 63 in 1960 whereas Industry
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products
were almost 16 and
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Services
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products
were about 18.
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After
that Agriculture
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products
was getting diminished
surprisingly
.
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53, 44 and 32, 12 from 1970 to 2000. Industry
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products
,
however
, was raising.
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First of all
up to 21, 25 and then 26, 27 over the years
respectively
.
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Services
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products
have made significant variations. Although the amount of
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Services
harvests were around 23 in 1970, it has increased almost to 27, 42 in 1980, whereas it was already up to approximately 62 by 2000.

IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India’s gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000.

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