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The table provides the information about the use of energy to cook food at home from the year 2000 to 2010 in Indian subcontinent.

The table provides the information about the use of energy to cook food at home from the year 2000 to 2010 in Indian subcontinent. 0A6q1
The following table figure out the generated power to use for cooking foods at home in the years 2000, 2004, 2008, and 2010 in south Asian nations. The demand of gas is high at the end of year 2010 (70%) and the stove and woods are use by individuals is decreasing with the increasing years. Electricity and gas ratio is getting larger year by years. At first, this picture the stove is just half of 50% out of 100% in year 2004 and continuously when years increase the demand of stove(k) of getting lower. In 2004 the ratio of stove is quite less than the earlier year in 2000. In 2008 the percentage of stove(k) is approximately a quarter (30%) and in last year 2010 there is low demand ratio of stove. Which is about 13%. similarly, the demand of woods is also decreasing year by years. In 2000 demand of woods is 45% after next years demand is getting lower. Electricity and gas of use is increasing with the increasing years. Overall, in south Asian countries generatedPower are use by individuals is gas stove. Which is about 70%.
The following table figure out the generated power to
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for cooking foods at home in the years 2000, 2004, 2008, and 2010 in south Asian nations.

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gas
is high at the
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2010 (70%) and the
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and woods are
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by individuals is decreasing with the increasing years. Electricity and
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ratio is getting larger
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by years.

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, this picture the
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stove
is
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2004 and
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when years increase the
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of stove(k) of getting lower. In 2004 the ratio of
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is quite less than the earlier
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in 2000. In 2008 the percentage of stove(k) is approximately a quarter (30%) and in last
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year
2010 there is low
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ratio of
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. Which is about 13%.
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similarly
, the
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demand
of woods is
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decreasing
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by years. In 2000
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of woods is 45% after
next
years
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demand
is getting lower. Electricity and
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of
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is increasing with the increasing years.

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, in south Asian countries
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. Which is about 70%.
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IELTS academic The table provides the information about the use of energy to cook food at home from the year 2000 to 2010 in Indian subcontinent.

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