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The table presents information about how many people had abroad travel in 5 various regions over 15-year-period.

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The table presents information about how many people had abroad travel in 5 various regions over 15-year-period. Looking from an overall perspective, it is obviously apparent that the most striking feature is a significant rocket in a total number of international tourists which is the result of all continents’ upward trend in abroad travellers except America. In addition, it should be emphasized that the lowest figure is recorded in Middle West. In 1990, a sum number of international travellers stood at approximately 449 millions which witnessed a considerable surge to around 693. 7 millions at the end of period. While nearly 280. 2 millions European had abroad trip by 1990, then experienced a substantial soar to just above 400 millions in 2005. The opposite trend was true in America with the figure starting at roughly 680. 5 millions and plunging dramatically to nearly 113. 2 millions by 2005. Approximately 18. 2 millions African went on international tour in 1990, there was a slight rise to around 28. 7 millions seen by 2005. Moreover, this similar trend was witnessed in Middle West, whose data reached roughly 15. 8 millions after standing only 9. 8 millions by 1990. A significant increase was seen in a number of Asia and Pacific international travellers from nearly 60. 2 in 1990 to around 135. 8 millions by 2005.
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in 5 various regions over 15-year-period.

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perspective, it is
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apparent that the most striking feature is a significant rocket in a total number of
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tourists which is the result of all continents’ upward trend in abroad
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travellers
except America.
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, it should
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that the lowest figure
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In 1990, a sum number of
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travellers
stood at approximately 449
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which witnessed a considerable surge to around 693. 7
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at the
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European had abroad trip by 1990, then experienced a substantial soar to
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above 400
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in 2005. The opposite trend was true in America with the figure starting at roughly 680. 5
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and plunging
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by 2005.

Approximately 18. 2
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African went on
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tour in 1990, there was a slight rise to around 28. 7
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after standing
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9. 8
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by 1990. A significant increase was
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in a number of Asia and Pacific
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IELTS academic The table presents information about how many people had abroad travel in 5 various regions over 15-year-period.

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